How to Write a Sales Page (and Pretty Much Anything Else)

If you're a regular reader of this blog, chances are good you'll want to sell something on your blog one day.

Even if you don't have anything to sell and think selling is evil, you can still learn a lot by studying the techniques of writing to sell. For example, you can look at your About page as a sales page (see No Meat Athlete's), where the "sale" you're trying to make is a subscription. In that case, you should present the benefits of reading your blog and, at the end, ask for the sale with a subscription button. (How to make nice buttons is the topic of a future post.)

It goes beyond just this though. You can use the techniques of writing ad copy to make every single post you publish more effective — that's the whole premise of the blog Copyblogger, which I hope you read.  If I had to point to a single moment when blogging got really easy, I'd say it's when I started studying copywriting.  As soon as I started incorporating it into my everyday writing, traffic took off.

So in this post I'm going to explain my thought process in writing the sales page for the e-book I just released. If you find it helpful to use the actual page as a template for your own, feel free. Keep in mind that, although I'm talking explicitly about a sales page, these ideas can be extremely powerful when used even in your daily posts.

Rule #1: Don't Be Sleazy

Nobody likes a fast-talking used car salesman, and people can sniff that out online a hundred miles away.  The kind of online selling that's cool is about connecting with your readers, building up trust by giving them tons of valuable content, and then, every so often, selling them something they actually want.

If you do all of that, and then all the sudden start talking car-salesmanese on your sales page, you're going to turn people off.  It's just weird.

Don't be weird.

Start With a Strong Headline

Writing an effective headline is crucial. The purpose of the headline is to attract attention, to get the reader to read the first sentence of the post (and it's the job of the first sentence to get the reader to read the second sentence, and so on).

You don't want to try to be witty here.  You're trying to sell something, not make people laugh. If your headline can be both funny and effective, great. But funny comes second.

To get some ideas for good headlines to use either on your sales page or your everyday posts, try the Cosmopolitan headline exercise.

Keep Your Sentences and Paragraphs Short

Internet readers are not known for their attention spans, and nothing scares off a reader faster than big blocks of text.  Write your sales pages (and even your blog posts) in short, simple sentences and paragraphs to draw readers down the page and keep them wanting more.

Connect Emotionally

If you want the reader to pay attention to you, you need to engage them on an emotional level. It's best if you can imagine a single reader as your target, and write directly to that specific person. Suggest that he or she "imagine" how it would feel to use your product, and then paint that scenario with your copy.

And remember: It's not about you.  Make it about them.

It's common practice in copywriting to first present a problem, so the reader feels some small amount of pain and recognizes the need for a solution. Then — BAM — you're there with your product to fix the problem. But some people prefer to take an all-pleasure approach and leave the pain out.  You're free to choose.

List Benefits, Not Features

Bulleted lists show up in a lot of ads because they're effective — readers in a hurry are drawn to them. But many people make a big mistake in their bullet list that costs them a lot of money: They list the features of their product rather than the benefits the reader can expect to gain by using the product.

"Personalized nutrition plan" is a feature; "Learn exactly what to eat for your specific needs" is a benefit.  "Five killer ab exercises" is a feature; "Strengthen your core and look great by summertime" is a benefit.

You get the point.

Scarcity Sells (If It's Genuine)

People procrastinate. There will be plenty who love your offer but don't buy, for the simple reason that they don't sense a need to buy now.

So put a deadline on your offer. Maybe it's a special price they can get by buying before a certain date. Maybe it's a bonus that goes away at some point. Whatever it is, make sure it's genuine. If you say the price is going to go up, it had better go up. Otherwise, nobody will believe you when you say it next time.

Make a Strong Call to Action

For some reason, lots of people do all the above but neglect to seal the deal. You have to ask for the sale.

How?  Tell the reader to buy. Use buttons or links with the words "Buy Now." In the case that it's not an actual sale you're trying to make, but rather to get the reader to visit a new page on your blog, the magical words "click here" are extremely effective.

Include a PS

Why do you put a PS on your sales page? Simple: Everyone reads the PS. So put something here that you want everyone to read. Maybe it's a guarantee, maybe it's a bonus, maybe it's a reminder that the offer expires soon.

If You Have It, Use Social Proof

People like to know that other people like themselves have bought your product. Chances are, you won't have testimonials right away, but as soon as you can get them, include them.

The best testimonials are from people viewed as authorities or from people who will be seen as similar to the reader, and they explain how your product solved a problem they were having.

Eliminate Distractions

It's very important that there are not a lot of links on your sales page that readers might use to leave.

It's not that you're trying to trap them — they can always press the back button or close their browser. But just like a kid who is easily distracted by shiny bells and whistles, so is the average Internet reader who likes to do 14 things at the same time.

You want to remove all the links from your sidebar or the top of your page. Some online copywriters will even tell you to remove your site's banner, but I prefer to leave that so that people who show up from Google have some confidence they're at a real site, not some automated scam that will send a robot to clean out their savings account.

If you're using a free Wordpress theme (or heaven forbid, Blogger), you might have trouble doing this.  Being able to edit the layout of individual pages is one of the reasons I use Headway for my blogs (that's my affiliate link).  I know Thesis can do the same thing, and I'm sure there other premium themes that can do this as well.  There might even be some free ones that do it, but those are the exception.

I hope these tips can help you write your sales page, or as I said, pretty much anything else you write online.  Even better, I find that studying copywriting makes me want badly to produce a product to sell.  It's exciting!  So even if you don't have any ideas yet, hopefully that increased desire will help you come up with some good ones.


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How $73 and an Idea Can Make You an Author

Sooner or later, every blogger thinks about writing an ebook or other information product.  For most of them, that's as far as it ever gets.

Fear is mostly to blame.  Sure, maybe the idea isn't perfect yet, or the amount of work seems overwhelming.  But take away fear, and all of the sudden these problems become surmountable.

Dave Navarro has a great post called Weekend Challenge: How to Turn a Beer into a Product.  Reading that post went a long way towards killing the fear for me.  Prior to reading it, I envisioned "My Ebook" as this giant monster with three heads that I might one day find the guts and the determination to slay.  Dave's article made me realize I could have a product in a weekend, not a year.

Producing Your First Ebook

My ebook, Fuel Your Run the Tarahumara Way, took longer than a weekend, and it wasn't as cheap to produce as Dave's product (which might cost three bucks max, and that's if you're drinking the good stuff).

No, it took a few weeks and it cost me 73 dollars.  But that's a hell of a lot less than I had always pictured when I thought about "My Ebook."  And the result, with a nice, shiny cover design and an attractive layout, makes it look like the work of an author, not a blogger in his mom's basement. (I swear I don't live in my mom's basement.)

You can do this.  If you're scared to write an ebook because it might not sell or your readers might hate it or someone might tell you that you suck, you have to do this.  It'll teach you to get over that.

Start small, like Dave suggests.  Or put just a little more time and money into it: You'll be shocked at how easy it is to produce something great when you leverage the resources now available on the internet.  Here's how I made my first ebook for 73 bucks.

How to Get a Great Ebook Design for $73

1. Find the perfect photo.  ($15)

You might be able to find something free, using clipart sites or Flickr's Creative Commons photos.  If you're on anything but the thinnest shoestring budget though, head over to istockphoto.com and just try not to be floored by the hundreds of beautiful images available for the price of lunch.  (Bonus: This is also a great place to find photos for blog posts.  The ones I buy usually cost between one and two dollars.)

2. Pay a designer to assemble your cover. ($50)

I'm a member of this unbelievably valuable internet marketing community called The Third Tribe (affiliate link), and in the forums there I met a woman named Sherice Jacob.  Sherice runs eCoverArtist, where she'll make you an ebook cover for 50 bucks. (The fancy kind that looks like a 3D book, magazine, spiral bound report, etc.)  Sherice was very accommodating of my lack of design know-how; we went through several iterations of me suggesting something stupid, her doing it for me, then me changing my mind, and she was pleasant and helpful throughout the whole process.

If it's a killer cover your after, I'd recommend spending more than 50 dollars on the design.  But if you're looking for a quick way to make your first (or second, or third) product look pretty damn good, especially if you have an idea of what you want it to look like, well, look no further.

3. Get a template for the actual document.  ($8)

Again, this is a place where it'd be easy to skimp and just use a plain white background and some standard fonts.  But when you can get a nice-looking template for five or eight dollars, why wouldn't you?  The templates like the one I got from EbookTemplates.net have a ready-made table of contents, title page, and headers and footers you can modify with your own information.

Until recently, Microsoft Word couldn't publish to PDF very easily, so most ebook templates you'll find are for OpenOffice Writer, which is free and works just like Word.

Other Costs

The above $73 gets you an ebook design.  You'll have to put it your own ideas and your own time, but that's the fun part.  And if your book is a recipe book, like mine, then of course you'll have to spend money to test and develop the recipes.  But since you get to eat the food, I'm not counting that.

I also pay five dollars per month for a service called e-junkie (affiliate link) that I use to sell stuff, mainly because it makes it easy to track and manage affiliate programs. This allows you to pay bloggers a commission when they refer people to your site to buy your ebook.  (And if you're interested in joining the affiliate program for my book, you can learn about it here.)

Do It

I hope you're convinced that creating an ebook, even one that looks pretty good, doesn't have to be expensive.  And that's one less excuse you now have not to write one.  Get over that fear, set a deadline and make it happen.

In my next post, I'll write about the process of writing a sales page to sell your ebook.  And honestly, the techniques of sales pages apply equally well to your About page and even your regular blog posts.  Every time you write, you're making a sale.  You're asking for the reader's attention.

When you write your blog posts, you're competing for attention, just like advertisers who want their ad to be the one that gets noticed and read.  But the techniques of writing sales copy are not obvious at all, so you won't want to miss that one.

Now get to work!


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